Wednesday, January 31, 2007

the deceptive cloud.

entwined,
tree into tree into tree.
crows
a confusing breeze.
answer me.
show me, see.
love, flee; lie
to the breeze.
trees into tree into tree
crow
a heartbroken breeze.
spring in winter,
answers plain.
love, a lie.
crows can't sing.
trunk on trunk on the ground.
find another,
make a sound.
love, not real
said aloud.
the sun can't love,
the decepticve cloud.

3 Comments:

Blogger Pixie said...

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3:20 AM  
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